Tuesday, October 3, 2017

As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers

Kunzang Namgyal
Mr. Ippolito
AP Biology- EF even
2 October 2017




“As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers”
By Karen Weintraub


I chose to review the article “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers” by Karen Weintraub. In the article Weintraub addresses the new issue regarding north atlantic humpback whales and right whales, their recent unusually high mortality rates. In the past 6 months, 15 North Atlantic right whales have died, which has reduced their population to a dwindling number below 450; and in the past 19 months, 53 humpback whales have been killed after colliding with boats or fishing gear. If these high mortality rates continue, whales may become endangered one day in the near future. In fact, Scott Kraus, the vice president and chief scientist at the Anderson Cabot Center for Ocean Life at the New England Aquarium went as far as to say that “We haven’t seen this level of mortality in right whales since we stopped whaling them” in coastal New England in the 1700s. Researchers became alarmed with these high mortality rates because something had to be causing the sudden and drastic spike. Researchers have attributed it to the rising water temperatures of the Gulf of Maine. As the water temperatures rise, the whales’ food sources have begun to migrate and so the whales follow, as Dr. Krauss stated that with the rising water temperatures, “Food is becoming more patchy and less reliable, so animals are moving around more,”. The new migration pattern of whales has led to many of their deaths because they are in more danger of colliding with ships or becoming entangled in fishing gear, in fact, half of the deaths for humpback whales are caused by ship strikes. Researchers have noted the change in migration of whales by keeping track of specific whales. They can identify the whales in two ways, which vary depending on the whale type. Humpback whales can be identified by the fluke pattern on their tail tails, which is a unique pattern of speckles, lines, and dots on their tails and right whales can be tracked by their callosity, which is the roughened skin on the top of their heads.


Many researchers of ocean life are concerned by the recent mortality rates of the whales. For those who are active members of the whale watching community, there is an online public catalog of humpback whale sightings, and people who post images of a specific whale then receive email notifications when that whale has been spotted again, and when a whale that you have been tracking ends up in an entanglement, you care. As a user of the sight, Ted Cheeseman, puts its, “People react very differently when it’s ‘my’ whale [involved in an entanglement]”. Many of you may still not find a connection with this article, for those of us who are not avid whale lovers, this article is still relevant to us because if the food source of the whales is moving due to rising water temperatures, what is happening to other animals and their food sources? The rising temperature has to affect more than just the whales, it must be affecting every creature in the ocean. And if you’re concerned neither with the unusually high mortality rate of whales nor with the other creatures in the ocean, perhaps you are a ship owner, whose ship now has a larger chance of hitting a whale due to their new migration patterns. Most collisions with whales lead to very costly ship repairments (as well as the injury or death for the whale).

Overall, I believe that this article was well-written and well-researched. The author quoted many credible sources including Scott Kraus, the vice president and chief scientist at the Anderson Cabot Center for Ocean Life at the New England Aquarium, Dan Dento, the president and chief of the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, and Peter Stevick, a senior scientist with the North Atlantic Humpback Whale Catalog. I do wish that Weintraub had gone into the food source of the whales and describe details pertaining to what whales eat and where exactly their food sources are migrating to. Also, at one point in the article she sounded very doubtful and unreliable when she stated that “It’s not even clear how right whales find their food. Christy Hudak, a research associate at the center, said she thinks the whales probably use a combination of senses”. The unclarity she addresses and the use of the word “thinks” makes the reader question Weintraub’s authority on the subject at hand. Weintraub also could have tried to emphasize the relevance of the article to an audience past the whale-loving community, I believe that she should have brought up the effects that the rising water temperatures could be having on other animals.

4 comments:

  1. Olivia Doyle
    AP Biology
    Mr. Ippolito
    9 October 2017

    Weintraub, Karen. “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New DangersAs Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers.” The New York Times, 2 Oct. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/10/02/science/humpbacks-right-whales.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    This week, I read Kunzang’s review of the NYT article entitled “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers”. The article discusses the recent discovery of humpback whales’ high mortality rates, specifically in the northern Atlantic. Kunzang gave a highly detailed summary of the article, and was sure to include direct quotes from researchers who study North Atlantic right whales. This provides the reader with more information on how the food source affects the movement of whales. In addition, it gives Kunzang’s review of the article credibility, as she cites where her information is coming from. It is important that Kunzang mentioned and analyzed the photos from the article of different patterns of whale tails, as it explains how researchers keep track of certain whales in order to study the effects of their patterns of migration on the increasing mortality rates. Lastly, Kunzang adequately addressed the importance of this problem in our daily lives. She explains that the increasing temperatures of the oceans could lead to problems for other creatures as well as shipbuilders, who often collide with whales, resulting in costly repairs. This is a key part of her review as it puts the article in context for the reader and addresses its importance.
    Kunzang’s review was very well-written, so I struggled in finding areas for improvement. However, even though she did adequately address real-world connections, I do think that she should have included more examples of the relevance of this problem to the rest of the world, as it would have grabbed the reader’s interest. She also should have expanded on the effects of rising temperatures for sea life and humanity as a whole. Lastly, I think Kunzang should have described more of what she liked about the article besides the fact that it was credible, as it would have given the reader insight into her own opinion of what she read.
    This article was very interesting as it opened my eyes on the issue regarding the high mortality rates of whales and what this could mean for our nation. What surprised me is that the mortality rate hasn’t been this high since the 1700s, when we stopped whaling them. In the future, I hope we can find a solution to the increasing temperatures of the ocean in order to preserve sea life and the safety of our oceans as a whole.

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  2. Gigi Chrappa
    AP Biology
    Current Event Comment
    11 October 2017

    Weintraub, Karen. “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New DangersAs Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers.” The New York Times, 2 Oct. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/10/02/science/humpbacks-right-whales.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    Kunzang wrote an insightful review of the article “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers,” by Karen Weintraub. Kunzang developed an accurate summary of this article; she included all of the main ideas. She highlights the central idea of the article when she states, “...the new issue regarding north atlantic humpback whales and right whales, their recent unusually high mortality rates.” In addition, she incorporates various quotes from the article to support these ideas. Also, Kunzang does an excellent job of explaining the significance of these quotes. Lastly, I was impressed by the connections Kunzang made between the article and its affect on society.
    Kunzang wrote a great review, however there are a few areas in which she can improve. Although she went into great detail about the decrease in population, I wish she elaborated more on what can be done, in the future, to reduce the death count of the North Atlantic whales. Lastly, if Kunzang wanted to make her review even better, she could include outside research. Overall, Kunzang’s review was both informative and well written.
    By reading this review I learned about a problem that I was unaware of. I found it interesting that recently, the North Atlantic humpback whales have had unusually high mortality rates. In addition, I was surprised by the fact that in the past 19 months, 53 humpback whales have been killed, due to the collision with boats or fishing gear. Overall, Kunzang’s review is very good and shows a great understanding of this article.

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  3. Charlie Gay
    AP Biology
    Mr. Ippollito
    10/11/17
    https://www.nytimes.com/2017/10/02/science/humpbacks-right-whales.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science
    Weintraub, Karen. "As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers." The New York Times. The New York Times, 02 Oct. 2017. Web.
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    I really enjoyed reading Kunzang’s review on the article “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers. Kunzang did a great job of including quotes from credible sources in the article. For example, she introduced who Dr. Kraus was, gave us his credentials, and then gave the quote: “We haven’t seen this level of mortality in right whales since we stopped whaling them.” This really added to the credibility of Kunzang’s review. Kunzang also did a great job of explaining why the whales are facing new dangers and what these dangers are. Rather than just telling us that the whales were in danger because of the warm seas, she told us that the warm seas result in less food sources and require the whales to swim around more. Kunzang then went on to explain that the whales increased movement resulted in the increased danger of them smashing into boats and fishing nets. Lastly, Kunzang did a great job of explaining the difference between a Humpback Whale and a Right Whale. I never knew the difference between these two whales and I was pleased that Kunzang explained the difference early on in the review.
    Although Kunzang review was very well done, there are some things that she could have done better. Although Kunzang did include some quotes from the article, which added to her credibility, she could have included even more. I think it would have been useful to have included a quote on how these results and conclusions were found. Kunzang also could have related this to a bigger picture in some way. I think her review would have been better if she related the whale deaths to global warming or talked about what she thinks can be done to fix this problem.
    I chose this article because the title really caught my eye. I have always been interested in sea life, like whales. I learned a lot from this article. The biggest thing that I am taking away from Kunzang’s review is that global warming and the water warming has a bigger effect than we may think of. I was amazed to learn that as a result of global warming and the waters becoming warmer that whales are smashing into boats more often now. I now have a greater appreciation for all of the people who are trying to stop global warming and am interested in what I can do even at my own home to help the cause.

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  4. Timothy Cushman
    Mr. Ippolito
    Ap Biology - Current Events Comment
    12 October 2017
    Current Events #4
    Weintraub, Karen. “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New DangersAs Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers.” The New York Times, 2 Oct. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/10/02/science/humpbacks-right-whales.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.
    Kunzang’s review of the article “As Seas Warm, Whales Face New Dangers” was overall very good and interesting. Kunzang included many numbers that helped the reader truly grasp the severity of the deaths of the whales. For example, she stated, “In the past 6 months, 15 North Atlantic right whales have died … and in the past 19 months, 53 humpback whales have been killed after colliding with boats or fishing gear.” These numbers make it very easy for the reader to understand the problem and they give the article credibility, because it has data to back up the claims. Secondly, Kunzang was able to identify a connection to society and even mention how the rising water temperatures may have effects on other animals too. She was able to understand the problem and connect it to other animals which helped connect the article to everyone, even those who are not whale lovers. Kunzang also did a great job incorporating quotes into her review. For example, she quoted, “Food is becoming more patchy and less reliable, so animals are moving around more.” This quote allowed the reader to better understand why the two whale species were migrating. This quote and the others Kunzang included aided the reader in understand the article better. Overall, Kunzang wrote a great review that informed the reader of an important problem.
    Although Kunzang wrote an overall great review, there were a few aspects that could improve her review. Firstly, Kunzang talks about how, “As the water temperatures rise, the whales’ food sources have begun to migrate.” However, she never goes into details about why the rising water temperatures are causing the food to migrate. This leaves the reader wondering about an important aspect of why the whales end up migrating. If she added this information it would give the reader a better overall understanding of why all the animals were migrating. A second improvement to her article could be including more details on what is being done or what can be done in the future to help lower the mortality rate of the right whales and humpback whales. By giving examples of actions that could be taken or are being taken, the reader would not be left wondering how the scientists are trying to fix this problem. By adding these two pieces of information, the article would give a more full description of the problem and of what can or what is being done.
    I choose to read Kunzang’s article review because her title stated that whales were facing danger. I think that whales are amazing and very interesting animals and I wanted to read about what was creating a new danger for them. In reading this article, I learned that there are many things that seem to have no effect to us, but can have drastic effects on other species. I learned that we have to be more conscious of environmental changes like rising water temperatures to see how they are affecting the population size of other species.

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