Jack Kochansky
AP Biology EF Even
Mr. Ippolito
28 October 2017
“For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End”
By Livia Albeck-Ripka
Albeck-Ripka, Livia. “For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End.”
The New York Times, The New York Times, 25 Oct. 2017,
Over the past few months, America has been struck with several natural disasters that have destroyed homes, devastated communities, and even taken lives. The combination of Hurricane Irma, Hurricane Harvey, Hurricane Maria, and the the wildfires in California and Arizona are some of the worst weather disasters in history. In the Caribbean, entire islands have been destroyed, such as Puerto Rico, whose power was almost entirely knocked out when Hurricane Maria struck. It will be a long road to recovery, and some people still do not have access to clean water. At the same time, the ecosystems of every area impacted by these natural disasters have been seriously damaged, and in light of all of the human concerns, this has often been overlooked. This article goes into detail about some of the already-endangered species that were further crushed. For example, 237 of the 252 living Mount Graham red squirrels that were still alive were killed in an Arizona wildfire, and the habitats of the remaining 35 have been all but destroyed, giving conservationists serious concerns about the survival of the species. “Most of them have lost the cones they’ve stored for their winter nourishment,” said Jeff Humphrey of the United States Fish and Wildlife Service. Other species in California and the Southwest, like the Amargosa vole and the Mexican spotted owl, also declined in numbers. Some conservationists responded quickly to the crisis, rescuing fish species before the water became uninhabitable due to ash. Hurricanes have also damaged populations of endangered species, especially in the Caribbean. For example, birds like the Attwater prairie chicken and deer from the Florida keys face threats from habitat destruction. Albeck-Ripka specifically points out that “The Miami blue butterfly (there are fewer than 100 left) are only ‘hanging on in a couple of Keys,’ Dr. Stein said.” Several other animals, such as parrots, turtles, and ocelots, are also now going to face serious challenges as a result of losing their homes.
Protecting the habitats and livelihood of endangered species throughout the world in order to preserve ecological diversity should be of utmost concern to the world, and the potential of serious weather events to devastate these populations highlights this need even more. Recently, human-caused climate change has resulted in more extreme weather events, especially hurricanes, that have had many detrimental impacts on the environment and on coastal communities. People pay less attention to the ecological impacts of natural disasters than they should, and articles like this help to raise attention for concerns like this. If no one helps to resolve these issues, we will certainly lose dozens, potentially hundreds of species of animals around the world because their habitats have been destroyed by unprecedented weather events. We would lose precious ecological diversity, and at some point, that would lead to a large-scale collapse of species with damaging reverberations for the environment and our lives. Thanks to the valiant efforts of many wildlife conservationists, most species were spared in this recent array of disasters, but it is still very possible that some will disappear completely in the next few months with dwindling numbers, food, and shelter. At a larger scale, losing an entire species of an animal could upset the balance of the food chain, potentially leading to the loss of other vital species and causing a global crisis. Thus, it is imperative that we be careful now, while many species exist, to ensure that we can save the animals of our world.
Overall, this was a very effective article that highlighted the importance of paying close attention to the well-being of several endangered species in the Americas. It was very strong in its use of specific examples of animals at risk, including the Attwater prairie chicken and the Mount Graham red squirrel. By including specific details and photos of them, the article helps to create a sense of urgency to address this crisis as soon as possible. Albeck-Ripka also quotes specific experts on the various species, adding to the credibility of her main points. I also noticed that she includes corrections for specific details of the article that she had initially gotten wrong, which shows a dedication to the truth and the most accurate representation of the ecological crises that are being further exacerbated by natural disasters. However, there were a few ways that the article could have been improved, as well. While the author offers specific examples of the species negatively affected by the recent hurricanes and wildfires, she does not go into the larger implications as much. It would have been more effective if she had emphasized some of the ways in which the loss of entire species could impact their local ecosystems. Unfortunately, many people do not understand that the loss of ecological diversity can have serious negative consequences everywhere. On the whole, however, Albeck-Ripka’s article was very informative and touching, and it made me realize what a wide range of fields the recent natural disasters have hit. More articles like this one should be written to gain awareness for severe ecological problems like these -- with enough knowledgeable people, the problem can be assuaged.
Sarah Goodell
ReplyDeleteMr. Ippolito
AP Bio: Current Event Comment
28 October, 2017
Current Event #6
Albeck-Ripka, Livia. “For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End.”
The New York Times, The New York Times, 25 Oct. 2017,
www.nytimes.com/2017/10/25/climate/fires-hurricanes-endangered-animals.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=9&pgtype=sectionfront.
This week, I read Jack’s review of The New York Times article titled “For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End” by Livia Albeck-Ripka. Jack opened with a detailed paragraph on the hurricanes that have hit this season, and even described the devastation that has amassed as a result. The background that he provided allowed for his review to be more fluid and allowed for his readers to be educated before reading on. Jack also supported all of his claims with facts and data, which gave him credibility as an author. Finally, towards the end of his reflection, Jack provided his audience with a critique of the original article and its author, Livia Albeck-Ripka. In doing so, Jack was able to inform his readers about the article - the positive and negative points - so that they would therefore be more prepared when reading.
Although Jack’s review was well-written and was very analytical, he could have improved upon two small details. Firstly, Jack did not include any quotes from the original article, which could have served to strengthen his own argument and could have further served to establish his credibility. Secondly, Jack did not discuss possible plans of action that may be taken to solve this problem. His readers are left wondering what conservationists are specifically doing to prevent extinction and are wondering how they themselves can help, if at all. If he had addressed this, Jack would have left his readers with fewer questions and he could have called them to take action.
Overall, Jack has led me to believe that this is a very serious issue that must be dealt with immediately, and also one that needs the help of the public and humankind in general. This review persuades readers to care more about the animals and their habitats which around us because they help us live, too. They cannot survive in the world that we have created, so we must assist them in remaining strong. I chose this article because this is a very concerning topic that I believe more people need to learn about and need to do something about. Change must come from action and cannot only come from speech or thought.
Abbey Thomas
ReplyDeleteAP Biology
Mr. Ippolito
30 October 2017
Albeck-Ripka, Livia. “For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End.”
The New York Times, The New York Times, 25 Oct. 2017,
www.nytimes.com/2017/10/25/climate/fires-hurricanes-endangered-animals.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=9&pgtype=sectionfront.
For this week’s current event, I reviewed Jack’s response to “For an Endangered Animal, a fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End” by Livia Albeck-Ripka. I chose to read Jack’s review because the title of article is very interesting, and applies to current environmental issues. The first thing that Jack did well was he set the scene, he recounted the information of the recent mass hurricanes and their impacts on people. Then he switches the topic to ecosystems. A second thing that Jack did well was he commented on how animals and ecosystems had been left out of the news stream and have been overlooked. It is important that he made this comment because it is one of the key themes of Albeck-Ripka’s article, and is a good transition into the discussion of ecosystems. Lastly, Jack uses statistics to support the statement that species may be extinct due to these hurricanes. Using actual statistics made the argument more valid.
In his second paragraph, Jack writes that it is important to keep biodiversity in the environment. While this is true, he should have explained what ecological diversity does for the environment and for the economy. Also, Jack could have been more specific on what the different methods and efforts there are to restore ecological diversity to regions hit by hurricanes or other natural disasters.
Overall, Jack wrote a detailed review of Livia Albeck-Ripka’s article on the effect of natural disasters on endangered species. The most important information I learned from Jack’s review was that hurricanes affect the ecosystems. I understood the effects of fire, but not hurricanes. It's frustrating to see how the United States is slow to help human victims of hurricanes, so one can assume it will be a long time before proper funding is sent to restore ecological diversity in hurricane damaged regions.
David Weild
ReplyDeleteAP Biology
Mr. Ippolito
30 October 2017
Albeck-Ripka, Livia. “For an Endangered Animal, a Fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End.”
The New York Times, The New York Times, 25 Oct. 2017,
www.nytimes.com/2017/10/25/climate/fires-hurricanes-endangered-animals.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=9&pgtype=sectionfront.
I chose to review Jack Kochansky’s response to “For an Endangered Animal, a fire or Hurricane Can Mean the End” by Livia Albeck-Ripka. The reason I chose to read this review was because of the review title and because I have read Jack’s writings in the past and they are usually well-written and interesting. Jack provided a good background citing hard information about the mass hurricanes. He touches on every main point of the article such as the ecosystem references. As well as this, Jack did a great job analysing the article by observing how things like ecosystems and animals have been left out of news which was actually a main section of which the article was about. Lastly, Jack gives the reader positive and negative insight about the article allowing the reader to have another opinion of how the article was written other than his or her own.
While Jack does some things great, other things he can improve on. For example, when he talks about the methods and efforts of restoring ecological diversity, he can be more specific of what could actually be done instead of just using a broader reference. One last thing Jack could have done to improve his writing is to use direct quotes from the article which would strengthen his talking points about the article.
I enjoyed reading this review of Livia Albeck-Ripka’s article. I learned about how natural disasters can devastate ecosystems which danger endangered species which are already in danger. However, it was sad to learn about the slow response of natural disaster teams in the U.S..