Layla Brinster
AP Biology
12/10
Current Event
Scutti, Susan. “Most US Adults Have Not Gotten a Flu Shot for This Mild Season.” CNN, Cable News Network, 7 Dec. 2018, www.cnn.com/2018/12/07/health/flu-season-vaccination-november-30-cdc/index.html.
Susan Scutti, in her “Most US Adults Have Not Gotten a Flu Shot for This Mild Season” writes that according to the NORC, a research program at the University of Chicago, the majority of adults have not gotten their flu shot this season. ‘Only 43% of surveyed people 18 or older said they had gotten vaccinated against the flu, according to NORC, which has conducted the National Immunization Survey for the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention since 2005. Including the approximately 14% of adults who said they will get the shot, around ⅓ of adults will not get their flu shot. In part, the reason for this is that this season is particularly mild, with low to moderate flu activity, a dramatic change from previous years of high activity. Although some may think the large fraction of people who remain unvaccinated is because of the low activity, they are wrong; the number of people vaccinated has been similar to years past, in accordance to Richard Webby, a flu scientist. However, the amount of flu-related deaths “was below the usual threshold for this time of year, the CDC said.” Furthermore, only about 2.2% of people visited the doctors for ‘flu-like symptoms’ and 1 for every 100,000 hospitals visits was due to the flu. These reassuring statistics, according to Webby, are because of the dominant flu strand, H1N1, and its match to the developed vaccine, but it is still recommended that people, especially young children/babies get vaccinated.
This connects to society because the flu is a real-world issue. Multiple people have died because of the flu. Even though the flu mortality rate this year is low, it is still very relevant and has caused the deaths of a few. Many people should get vaccinated if they aren’t already in order to stay healthy and resistant to the flu. Also, when people get vaccinated they protect themselves from the flu and prevent the virus from spreading and developing. Therefore, it is safest to get vaccinated and keep yourself healthy. People may not view the flu as a terrible illness, but it does possess the capabilities to be one; it is important to protect yourself. This article also affected me because I haven’t gotten my flu shot yet, so now I want to make my appointment.
Scutti wrote a very well crafted article explaining the flu and its effect this year. She did a nice job with incorporating statistics and relevant quotes from researchers to validate her points and argument. However, Scutti also could have included other references to different scientists or researchers. Scutti also referenced a study done multiple times but did not elaborate enough on the study, in my opinion. In order to improve this, she could have included a graph, table, or chart, with more data in order to provide a visual representation and clarify any misconceptions.
Ally Bruno
ReplyDeleteMr. Ippolito
AP Biology
12 December 2018
Scutti, Susan. “Most US Adults Have Not Gotten a Flu Shot for This Mild Season.” CNN, Cable News Network, 7 Dec. 2018, www.cnn.com/2018/12/07/health/flu-season-vaccination-november-30-cdc/index.html.
Layla has crafted an informative and well written current event based off an article filled with information about important health related issues today. Layla did a great job of presenting the statistical evidence on flu shot consumers and its diminishing rate. With so many different percents featured in the article, Layla was able to organize the statistics in a way that is straightforward and easy to comprehend. Layla also did an excellent job of connecting the information she learned about the flu and the shot statistic, to her personal life and its world significance. By saying that she is now compelled to make an appointment for a flu shot, Layla is proving the persuasiveness of her article. Lastly, I really enjoyed the way Layla combatted the typical perception of the flu as a very mild illness and something that shouldn't cause concern. Layal explained that the flu can actually have extensive repercussions and this added to the imperativeness of her article.
Although, I believe Layla wrote a wonderfully insightful review, oe area should could have improved in was her explanation of the research performed in her article. She could have delved more deeply into the studies and results that prove the flu shot to be necessity. Also, Layla could have added some examples of how the flu affects family in America. While she did say that the flu is widespread she did not explain how its effects or thow they manifest themselves.
The most interesting take away of this article for me was that last flue season was one of the deadliest in American history, killing 80,000 people in the United States. For an illness that seems to be so common and has so many remedies, it was hard to comprehend that so many people died from the diseases last season. This has really made me consider my immune system during flu season and I am grateful to have received the flu shot.