Tuesday, November 13, 2018

“The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.”

Ella Stupart
Mr. Ippolito
November 15, 2018
Current Event #8


In his article “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions”, Brad Plumer discusses a new environmentally friendly alternative to diesel fueled school buses. Traditional school buses expose children to dangerous exhaust and emit CO2 into the atmosphere, contributing to climate change. According to the article, White Plains School District recently invested in five electric powered school buses which cost a whopping $365,000 each. White Plains was able to obtain the funds through a deal with Consolidated Edison. While many schools across the United States are trying to make a similar switch, many districts don’t have the funds. In attempt to make a change, many states are setting aside money to fund new electric powered school buses. The article mentions that some are against setting aside this money, arguing that the buses are too expensive to set aside enough money to fund enough buses to make a significant difference. The article introduces the refute that if more buses are purchased, production rates will go up and therefore price will go down. Despite these economic drawbacks, according to the article, these buses are 75% less expensive to fuel and 60% less expensive to maintain than traditional buses are. Some states still do not have the funds to provide schools with enough of these buses to make a difference in CO2 emission, but they are still working to introduce more environmentally friendly methods of fuel. For example, Arizona is working to switch to propane fuel, which is better for the environment than diesel fuel. Some are concerned with the safety and reliability of electric powered buses.While in 2016, schools in Massachusetts experienced issues with electric powered buses, White Plains has no complaints and the company which provides the buses, Lion Electric, says they have learned from their mistakes and are setting up a service center in New Jersey in case of issues. Additionally, White Plains school district claims that their new buses have led to educational opportunities and environmental awareness among their students. In this article, Plumer argues that electric buses are beneficial to the environment.  
Global warming has been a prominent issue in our society for a long time. Because it is such a lasting issue, I believe it often gets disregarded or forgotten by many, so it is important that we are coming together as a nation to make a change in our environment. While it may seem insignificant that one school district in the country now uses five electric powered buses, it is a big step towards a more sustainable future. Surrounding districts and states are using White Plains as an example for their own schools and coming up with new ways to fund this project. Like most movements, it starts with one group of people and creates a ripple effect until a huge change is created. Another important factor in this project is the educational factor. When students see that their district is switching to electric school buses, it draws curiosity and passion about the issue. Students will want to find out what else they can do to help with climate change which will create an even greater impact. I believe that the switch to electric powered school buses is a small, but significant piece to a huge movement that has the power to change the world.
This article was very effective in introducing the audience to the benefits of electric buses, but there are also a few areas in which it can be improved. The most important strength in this article is the variety of subjects that Plumer discussed, for example, the economic aspect, convenience, the environmental aspect, alternatives, and opposing views were all mentioned. The wide range of subtopics allowed for the author to answer the audience’s questions as they read the article. Even though he had many topics to discuss, Plumer introduced his ideas in a clear and logical manner; the article flows well and is easy to understand. He also does a sufficient job at introducing and refuting opposition without forming a bias. Instead of stating his own opinion, he refutes claims using the opinions of electric-bus companies and supporting statistics from reliable sources including Bloomberg New Energy Finance. Although this was a strong article, I wish that Plumer elaborated more on how bad current diesel fuel school buses are for the environment in contrast with the new electric buses. He should have included statistics and further information on how much gas is emitted from current school buses and how it affects the health of children and the environment. He also could have included the projected long term effects if more schools transition to using environmentally friendly methods of transportation. This would create context for the magnitude of the issue and would inspire the audience to make a difference if they were informed on how it may affect them personally.


7 comments:

  1. Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    In her review of the article, “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions", Ella shows a strong understanding of the article's topic and excellently communicates the article's main points to readers. Her review on its own does a great job of teaching readers about the topic. Secondly, she does a very good job of highlighting the overall importance of the topic. She acknowledges that White Planes high school on its own is not making a huge difference, but explains it is one step in the direction of a better future for our planet. Finally, Ella's review was, overall, very well written. It follows a clear, organized structure and is easy for readers to understand.

    I feel that it may have been beneficial for Ella to omit some of the details she put in her review. She went into the content of the article in a great depth, but could have made her points more efficiently by including fewer specifics. Additionally, she could have improved her review with some more revision, as there are some redundancies, awkward phrases and technical errors that could be easily eliminated.

    I believe that the topic described in this article describing one of the technologies that will characterize our future. It is clear from scientific evidence that, if humans keep living the way we are, we will very quickly and very completely destroy our planet. As we progress, we will need to search for more and more environmentally-friendly alternatives to our current destructive technologies. Electrically powered buses, for instance, are appearing as an alternative to our traditionally school buses. Clearly they are not yet an efficient solution, as their price is far too high, but their promotion and development is just one step in the direction of our world's future of environmental conservation.

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  2. Emily Perry
    Mr. Ippolito
    AP Biology
    November 14, 2018

    Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    The thing that really stuck out to me about Ella’s current event review is how well written it is. From the first sentence, you can tell how much thought went into her review. It is well structured, beginning with the topic and then discussing the other parts of the article in chronological order. I also like that Ella explained why it is important for schools to switch to the environmentally friendly diesel fueled school buses. In the second paragraph she explained how even if the actual contribution of each district is small, switching to environmentally friendly alternatives of transportation will motivate other districts to do the same. Finally, I think that Ella’s critique of the article is very thorough. She offered several examples of what the author did well in writing the article and what he could improve.
    Although she did a great job describing the significance in general, I wish that Ella had gone into more detail about the specific negative effects of global warming. This would be more effective at convincing people that global warming is an urgent issue that must be taken care of soon before it is too late. I also think that Ella could shorten her review and touch on only the most important points of the article. While everything she wrote flows nicely and is very interesting, she could condense some areas such as the last half of the second paragraph.
    I am in awe that people found a way to make school buses more environmentally friendly. Previously, if you wanted to help the environment, you would have to walk or bike to school, which isn’t an option for some people who live far from their school. This article has made me see how technology is key to saving the environment from pollution.

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  3. Emily Perry
    Mr. Ippolito
    AP Biology
    November 14, 2018

    Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    The thing that really stuck out to me about Ella’s current event review is how well written it is. From the first sentence, you can tell how much thought went into her review. It is well structured, beginning with the topic and then discussing the other parts of the article in chronological order. I also like that Ella explained why it is important for schools to switch to the environmentally friendly diesel fueled school buses. In the second paragraph she explained how even if the actual contribution of each district is small, switching to environmentally friendly alternatives of transportation will motivate other districts to do the same. Finally, I think that Ella’s critique of the article is very thorough. She offered several examples of what the author did well in writing the article and what he could improve.
    Although she did a great job describing the significance in general, I wish that Ella had gone into more detail about the specific negative effects of global warming. This would be more effective at convincing people that global warming is an urgent issue that must be taken care of soon before it is too late. I also think that Ella could shorten her review and touch on only the most important points of the article. While everything she wrote flows nicely and is very interesting, she could condense some areas such as the last half of the second paragraph.
    I am in awe that people found a way to make school buses more environmentally friendly. Previously, if you wanted to help the environment, you would have to walk or bike to school, which isn’t an option for some people who live far from their school. This article has made me see how technology is key to saving the environment from pollution.

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  4. Gaby Laval
    Mr. Ippolito
    AP Biology
    11/20/18

    Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.
    Ella summarizes and gives her opinions on Plumer's article very well in her review. Ella clearly does an excellent job both summarizing the article and giving her opinions on it. She gives such a vivid description to the reader that no questions are left unanswered. Additionally, she gives a good criticism of Plumer when she says "I wish that Plumer elaborated more on how bad current diesel fuel school buses are for the environment in contrast with the new electric buses." This raises a good point, and would help strengthen the author's argument if he were to elaborate more on the difference between electric and diesel cars. Lastly, Ella raises a very good point when she says " When students see that their district is switching to electric school buses, it draws curiosity and passion about the issue." She helps the reader understand the importance of not only actions by companies with large influence, but also education of kids about this issue.
    There are some areas where Ella could strengthen her argument. For example, she could have gone into more detail about other ways to preserve the environment. This could be through public education, preservation, lower emission practices, ect. Additionally, it would help Ella's review if she cleaned up her sentence structure a bit to make her writing more clear.
    The article being discussed is one of great importance to our world. Clean, renewable energy is essential to keep our world running successfully. These examples are just a few of the many ways that we can take action to improve the environment. Transportation is a very large contributor to our large greenhouse gas emissions, and it needs to be reduced quickly.

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  5. Jordan Hoang
    Mr. Ippolito
    AP Biology C Even
    111/24/18

    Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    Ella’s review of the article “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions” proved her great comprehension of the piece and her ability to summarize it into a straightforward and engaging manner. I specifically liked how her first paragraph provided a good deal of background information, including the economic and environmental benefits in switching to electric powered cars. In addition, I admired her thoughtful insight on how this solution can not only improve global warming, but engagement and community of students as well. Finally, I really liked the format of her critiques, which were both reflective and significant. She kept an objective point of view and acknowledged the strengths of the article while mentioning what the author could have done to made the piece better.

    Although much of Ella’s review was very strong and eloquent, I believe she could have removed some excess information to make her piece more concise. Considering her review was quite long, I found some information mentioned to be trivial for the purposes of the article, such as the sentence mentioning “White Plains was able to obtain the funds through a deal with Consolidated Edison”. Removing these types of statements would have allowed for the focus of her review to be more succinct. In addition, I felt like some parts of the article were mentioned too briefly. For instance, Ella wrote that the district claims “that their new buses have led to educational opportunities and environmental awareness among the students”. Instead of mentioning all the environmental benefits of these new buses, I believe focusing on these education benefits as well would have made Ella’s review even stronger.

    I resonated a lot with Ella’s statement that “the switch to electric powered school buses is a small, but significant piece to a huge movement that has the power to change the world”. This point emphasizes how we as humans forget to prioritize our personal impact on Earth. Although these efforts might seem costly or useless, each one of us has the ability to have an astounding impact on the quality of our environment.

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  7. Christopher Hutchins
    Mr. Ippolito
    November 25, 2018
    Current Event #9

    Plumer, Brad. “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Nov. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/11/12/climate/electric-school-buses.html?rref=collection/sectioncollection/climate&action=click&contentCollection=climate®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.

    In her review of the article, “The Wheels on These Buses Go Round and Round With Zero Emissions", Ella excellently communicates the article's main points to the readers and shows a strong understanding of the article's topic. Her review does a wonderful job teaching readers of the topic. She also does a very nice job highlighting the importance of the topic. She acknowledges that White Plains High School on its own is not making a major difference, but explains that it is one step in the direction of a better future for our planet. Finally, Ella's review was overall very well written because it follows a clear, organized structure and it understandable for all of its readers.

    As interesting as Ella’s review was, she might have gone too far into detail. The main point I would change, would be the amount of detail she uses in explaining the emissions. It would have been more efficient for her to include fewer specifics. Additionally, she could have improved her review by reading it over and removing her redundancies and errors. By replacing these small blunders, Ella could greatly improve her review.

    The topic described in this article is one that will characterize our future. The technologies being created may have a major impact on the way our children grow up. If humans keep living the way they currently are, they will destroy the planet in the matter of decades. Although, looking into the future, we will need to search for more environmentally-friendly alternatives to our current technologies. Electrically powered buse are appealing as a change to the traditional school bus. Clearly they are not yet an efficient solution, as they cost too much, but their promotion and development is just one step in the right direction of our world's future of the conservation of our environment.

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