Wednesday, January 17, 2018

Where Did Animals With Tail Weapons Go? Here's a Back Story.

Kunzang Namgyal
Mr.Ippolito
AP Biology- EF Even
17 January 2018




This week I decided to read the article, “Where Did Animals With Tail Weapons Go? Here's a Back Story,” by New York Times writer, Nicholas St. Fleur. This article focused on animals with fearsome tail weapons and the lack of these animals today. In previous eras, there were large animals that could wreak havoc with their huge, spiky tails. There were dinosaurs such as the ankylosaurus which sported a clubbed tail, the stegosaurus which had tails covered in spear-like spikes, and the sauropods which could fling fused clumps of bones from their tails at their predators. Since those older eras, the earth has not been inhabited by many animals with formidable tails. Today there is only one species that has a bony tail, the lizard known as Smaug has a smaller bony, spiky tail. Other animals that share this bony defense are the porcupine with its quills and the pangolin with its scales. However, we do not see many animals with the same traits as the dinosaurs listed earlier. Scientists questioned where these animals went and discovered three major commonalities between all mammals, reptiles, and nonavian dinosaurs that had tail weapons. All animals with a formidable tail had been large, herbivorous, and were protected by an armored body. Victoria Arbour, a paleontologist at the University of Toronto and the Royal Ontario Museum explains that “That’s a really rare combination no matter what time period you’re looking at.” This helps the reader understand why these animals are so uncommon today.


This article is relevant to us in a few ways. First, it gives us a more in depth look into the Earth’s past and evolution, for some reason only animals that fit those particular three categories evolved to have tail weapons. This article could also provide evidence that some of the current animals on the Earth will eventually evolve to have tail weapons, as “the authors [of the study] hypothesized that developing bony clubs like the ankylosaurus and the glyptodon was a gradual, evolutionary process.”

I chose to read this article because I was interested with learning how huge animals with tail weapons evolved into the animals we see today. The article did not go into depth on the evolution of these animals after the species had developed tail weapons, therefore I believe the title of the article was quite misleading, as it did not answer the question posed in the title, “Where Did Animals With Tail Weapons Go? Here's a Back Story.” I also wish that the author had explained the advantage or disadvantages of tail weapons, as it would have given the readers more background information. I do believe that Fleur did an adequate job of helping the readers visualize the animals he was referring to by describing their size, appearance, and diet, as well as giving examples of some dinosaurs. I found it very interesting that all animals with tail weapons were herbivores. I wonder if in later eras, animals will again develop tail weapons.

1 comment:

  1. AP Bio
    Olivia Scotti
    1/18/18
    Current Event # 14
    St, Nicholas. “Where Did Animals With Tail Weapons Go? Here's a Back Story.” The New York
    Times, The New York Times, 16 Jan. 2018,
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    There were many aspects of Kunzang’s review written well. One part of her review that I felt she did particularly well was her description of how animals with sharp and weapons tails. For instance she states how “In previous eras, there were large animals that could wreak havoc with their huge, spiky tails. There were dinosaurs such as the ankylosaurus which sported a clubbed tail, the stegosaurus which had tails covered in spear-like spikes, and the sauropods which could fling fused clumps of bones from their tails at their predators.” Through this summary the reader is able to understand the main point of the article that is being reviewed. Another part of the review which was done well was the addition of quotes from research on this topic. For example, “Victoria Arbour, a paleontologist at the University of Toronto and the Royal Ontario Museum explains that ‘That’s a really rare combination no matter what time period you’re looking at.’” Through this the reader understands what research was conducted. This is also allows the reader to understand the tone of the article through direct quotes from the passage. Another part of the review that was done well was her ability to describe how this discovery is beneficial to the rest of the world. For instance she states, “First, it gives us a more in depth look into the Earth’s past and evolution, for some reason only animals that fit those particular three categories evolved to have tail weapons.” This strengthened her review because the reader was able to see how research is useful for a lot of the population.
    Although there were many parts of Kunzang’s review written well there were areas for improvement. One part of her review which could have been improved was her critique paragraph. Although she did mention the negatives and positives of the article I wish she had been less general when stating her positives and gone into more detail. Through adding more specific details about the positives of the article the reader would have had a better understanding of the article. Another part of the article that could have been improved was if she added more details about the new evidence about the evolution of animals from this study. Also this would help strengthen her description of the research as a whole.
    Overall, I felt Kunzang wrote a strong review of this article which the reader could easily understand. Her review was written clearly and smoothly which allowed the reader to learn about the topic more easily and understand the research conducted. I enjoyed reading this review because I learned more about how certain features of animals could disappear. Overall, I liked how she related the effects of this study to the present world. Through her discussion of this article the reader got a better grasp on the topic and the importance of this new research.

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