Ellie Parson
Mr. Ippolito
AP Biology
Current Event 13
Citations:
WEINTRAUB, Karen. “The Swiss Consider the Lobster. It Feels Pain, They Decide.” The New York Times , 12 Jan. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/01/12/science/lobster-pain-swiss.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.
Review:
Karen Weintraub, an author for the New York Times, wrote the article “The Swiss Consider the Lobster. It Feels Pain, They Decide” about the possibility of lobsters feeling pain when killed in the traditional cooking practice of placing them in a boiling pot of water. She begins by addressing current debates in Switzerland over the new laws ensuring ethical ways of killing lobsters as to avoid hurting them. Instead, other moral, quicker methods of killing the lobsters so they suffer the least possible amount should be considered, such as stunning. Stunning the lobsters is a way of killing a lobster instantly with electricity. Weintraub first brings in the opinion of a professor of animal behavior from Queen’s University, Robert Elwood, who is also responsible for the experiments that have moved the Swiss government’s decision. Although he claims there is “no absolute proof” (Elwood,1) Elwood’s experiments have only supported that lobsters are able to feel pain. Opposing this opinion, Dr. Joseph Ayers believes that “producing such a law is just a bunch of people anthropomorphizing lobsters”(Ayers, 1). Ayers states that lobsters “simply don’t have the hardware”(Ayers, 1) for feeling pain as humans do. As lobster’s brains do not contain specific parts associated with pain, and their predators swallow them whole, there is no need for the animals to evolve nerves for pain. Michael Tlusty, a biologist who specializes in lobsters at the University of Massachusetts, stands in the middle of the issue. He acknowledges that lobster’s brains aren’t developed for pain, but then questions if that is even an accurate fact to be trusted. Crustaceans have a completely different build than human beings, and it is hard to say whether they could feel pain without more research. As lobsters are able to lose limbs with ease, they do “continue to twitch after they’ve have their limbs ripped off” (Weintraub, 1). Weintraub moves from the opinions of different scientists on the issue, and focuses closely on why Dr. Elwood decided to research into lobster’s ability for feeling pain- a famous chef asked him about it. Elwood immediately conducted studies on crustaceans and “has shown that crustaceans guard wounded limbs and avoid areas where they’re been shocked” (Weintraub, 1), and is certain that they must feel something that keeps them so alert. Weintraub ends her article contrasting the different ways the scientists recommend killing lobsters. To avoid hurting lobsters further, Elwood suggests quicker, more ethical ways to kill lobsters before they are cooked over boiling the alive in a pot, which may take a minute to kill them. Dr. Ayers, on the other hand, insists the best way to kill a lobster is by boiling water in a pot. Dr. Tlusy prefers placing the lobsters on ice first to slow them down.
While reading this article, it became apparent how different scientific concerns of countries are around the world. While Switzerland is focused on the right way to morally kill a lobster before eating it, countries like the United States of America are divided on much larger topics such as climate change. However, as very small, seemingly simple organisms such as lobsters appear hold the ability to suffer, the worlds of science and morals have to combine. Including scientific studies from Elwood into politics is an example of society making laws in response to scientific research. It is interesting to see how a question like “Do lobsters feel pain?” can introduce new policies into a nation. The idea of morally killing animals can also be related to a recent trend in society, veganism and vegetarianism. Many people have recently changed their eating habits based on the ways animals are being treated before their meat ends up on a plate as to avoid supporting the abuse of animals. Killing lobsters in a way that could cause them pain may be able to help readers understand why some vegans and vegetarians avoid eating meat and seafood- because they view it as immoral. The idea of torturing an animal before eating it is mortifying to many.
Weintraub's article was very well written, included many opinions from multiple scientists, and succeeded into making her readers reflect on the morals of killing certain animals if they feel pain. Throughout her article, she focused on the claims of three experts, all of which were different from each other to introduce the diversity of opinions on the topic. She also included quotes from the scientists perfectly matching the theme of her article. Weintraub not only addressed the problem at hand, but wrote about solutions of humanely killing lobsters, such as the Crustastun. However, Weintraub failed to explain in detail any of the studies conducted by Dr. Elwood. Weintraub also did not include any background as to why Switzerland was considering changing the law outside from Dr. Elwood’s studies. It would have been interesting to read about Dr. Elwood’s experiments and the critical thinking behind the change in law. If she did include more information about the studies, it would add more depth to the article and allow students to draw their own conclusions based on the data aquired.
Jack Kochansky
ReplyDeleteAP Biology EF Even
Mr. Ippolito
5 February 2017
The Swiss Consider the Lobster. It Feels Pain, They Decide
By Karen Weintraub
Reviewed by Ellie Parson
Weintraub, Karen. “The Swiss Consider the Lobster. It Feels Pain, They Decide.” The New York Times, 12 Jan. 2018, www.nytimes.com/2018/01/12/science/lobster-pain-swiss.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront.
For this current events comment, I looked at Ellie’s great review of the New York Times article “The Swiss Consider the Lobster. It Feels Pain, They Decide” by Karen Weintraub. It was very well-written, and she was sure to tick all of the boxes to write a stellar review, and she did far more than what was necessary. For example, Ellie was sure to include several relevant quotes directly from the experts involved in the article, which shows that she understands the key elements of the study and wants to communicate them as clearly as possible. Second, she describes the study very clearly and articulates the various positions of several different researchers, adding credibility to her review. Finally, Ellie does a very good job in highlighting the relevance of this scientific inquiry, which gives us the data we need to answer ethical questions about animal cruelty and our food supply. She understands that the data itself cannot make an ethical decision but highlights that its implications could be far-reaching for people all around the world. Beginning with lobsters, it may pose ethical questions regarding the treatment of other animals to be eaten, as well.
Because Ellie’s review was so strong, it was difficult to find things on which she could have improved. Aside from a few very minor grammatical errors that could be corrected by an extra pass of editing, there were few substantive errors throughout. I am genuinely struggling to find any more places for improvement in this article. I did notice that in the relevance paragraph, Ellie went a little on about the implications of this study in the context of the nation from which it originated. It might have been a little extreme for Ellie to say that this study demonstrates the completely different approaches to science and experimentation in Switzerland versus America, but it is certainly true that we would rarely hear about an experiment in the US focusing on the ethics of cooking lobster.
From this article, I learned more about an issue that I had not really considered before: the treatment of fish and shellfish before their deaths. As a society, we have in the past helped to regulate the treatment of farm animals, like cows and pigs, as they are raised for food, with varying success. Although conditions are better now than they once were, industrial farms are often overcrowded, dirty, and infiltrated with chemicals and antibiotics. But regardless of whatever success (or lack of success) that we have had in this field, no one has really stopped to consider that fish and lobsters might feel pain, too. Because they look so different from us, we assume that they do not feel pain, but this study indicates that they very well may. These types of experiments are valuable because they raise new ethical questions that should concern society as science, technology, and society become more and more interconnected. I liked this article and review because it may me stop and think about something new.