Erin Foley - AP Bio C Odd - Current Event 11 - Jan. 10th, 2020
Ohio State University. "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
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In the article, "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from plants”, riveting and comforting discoveries about the future of biofuel are described. For years, scientists have been trying to find more efficient ways to produce biofuels, so that they could one day truly compete with fossil fuels. The process of converting sugar to fuel is well-known and well-used, but it is extremely difficult to do on a mass-scale, even with government-subsidized biofuel initiatives. This process of converting sugar to butanol/ethanol requires a lot of NADH and its derivative, NADPH, both of which allow carbon in cells to be transformed into energy. However, it is usually extremely expensive to produce high levels of these “helper molecules”, or cofactors. Now, a study published in Science Daily reveals that biochemists and engineers at Ohio State may have found a cheaper way to produce them. Researchers used an electrode - a conductor of energy that can oxidize NADH - made out of nickel and copper to recreate NADH and NADPH in their reduced forms. Nickel and copper are both inexpensive materials, thus with a smaller production cost, “biofuels [could become] a very… attractive” energy source, said Vish Subramaniam, senior author on the paper and retired Ohio State professor of engineering. The researchers, Jonathan Kadowaki and Travis Jones, (two mechanical and aerospace engineering graduate students), ran additional tests and found that the oxidized NADH they recreated with the electrode could in fact produce alcohol from another molecule. This proved that butanol/ethanol for fuels can in fact be produced on a cleaner - and cheaper - scale than ever previously thought.
The environmental impacts of this discovery are obvious, but because NADH and NADPH are involved in so many cellular conversion processes, the experiments have additional implications in the scientific community. For years, global corporations and governments have hesitated to reduce fossil fuel usage/increase reliance on biofuels due to their high production cost. Because of this, our earth is at a major risk of overheating, as fossil fuels release carbon dioxide/greenhouse gases that trap heat in our atmosphere. In 2020, we reached average global temperatures that were 2.25 degrees Fahrenheit above pre-industrial averages. This margin of change is equivalent to that of 2016, which is alarming considering 2016 experienced a natural heating cycle - whereas 2020 experienced a natural cooling cycle. Biofuels, on the other hand, are considered renewable energy sources, emit fewer greenhouse gases, are biodegradable, and are much safer to find on earth than fossil fuels (no drilling or mining necessary). Moreover, the discoveries made by Kadowaki and Jones have implications for oncology. Subramaniam’s previous work shows that controlling the flow of electrons within cancer cells - which they could do more easily with access to NADH - could slow their growth and ability to metastasize. Finally, this discovery could help scientists create synthetic plants, a creation that Subramaniam believes “could potentially reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere and help address climate change.” If NADH is accessible in large quantities, scientists could potentially use it to conduct artificial photosynthesis, bringing them one step closer to synthetic plants.
This article successfully connects intricate biological concepts to relevant global issues, all the while making the biological concepts simple to understand. It has a simple yet effective structure, beginning with the problem (“The process of converting sugar to alcohol has to be very efficient if you want to have the end product be competitive with fossil fuels”) and explaining how the solution was found through scientific research (“A less expensive and simpler method to create the "helper molecules" that allow carbon in cells to be turned into energy”). The authors do not go too in-depth on some ideas, which was at times helpful, as some would have been too abstract for me to understand. For instance, to explain how their discovery relates to cancer, they merely state that “Both cofactors also play an important role in slowing the metabolism of cancer cells and have been a target of treatment for some cancers,” a simple yet impactful description. Finally, the authors did a thorough job at citing the discovery’s research, connecting it to biofuels, oncology, and synthetic plant creation. Still, there was some room for improvement. For one thing, they did not explain the previous method of generating NADH for biofuel creation, or really anything about biofuel creation (other than that it is expensive). This left me somewhat confused as to how their method was cheaper - was the electrode always used to oxidize cofactors, and they just made one with cheaper materials? Or was this a completely new method? Including this information would have clarified how the researchers revolutionized biofuel synthesis. Finally, the researchers could have better explained the importance of using biofuels. They did not list any reasons as to why biofuels from plants are a better alternative to fossil fuels, which required me to complete additional research. Background on biofuels vs. fossil fuels would increase the number of readers this article would reach, and make it more comprehensive in general.
Olivia Cevasco
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15 January 2021
Current Event 11 - Comment on Erin Foley’s Review
Foley, Erin. Scientists Develop a Cheaper Method That Might Help Create Fuels from Plants, Bronxville AP Biology, 12 Jan. 2021, bronxvilleapbiology.blogspot.com/2021/01/scientists-develop-cheaper-method-that.html.
Ohio State University. "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
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Erin’s review of “Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from plants" has intriguing implications for our planet. Erin does a brilliant job prefacing the need for this new study by stating the problem with the previous model. Previously, biofuels were too expensive to compete with fossil fuels because of the cost of the molecules needed to break sugar down to butanol/ethanol and therefore couldn’t be used on a mass-scale. She says that “it is usually extremely expensive to produce high levels of these “helper molecules”, or cofactors.” Explaining the cost barrier enables the audience to understand that the issue was not lack of scientific discovery of these biofuels but rather the cost. Erin also offers a variety of implications across industries for these cheaper biofuels to help the reader understand that it’s not just about cars. She discusses how this technology can be part of the solution to slow global warming, saying “Biofuels, on the other hand, are considered renewable energy sources, emit fewer greenhouse gases, are biodegradable, and are much safer to find on earth than fossil fuels (no drilling or mining necessary).” Erin connects this study back to its proposed effect on the environment so her audience can understand the value of biofuels. Finally, Erin leaves the reader with questions she had after reading the main article, expressing some faults from the original article but also demonstrating her curiosity about this topic. She wonders “This left me somewhat confused as to how their method was cheaper - was the electrode always used to oxidize cofactors, and they just made one with cheaper materials? Or was this a completely new method?” Posing questions demonstrates Erin’s complex scientific thinking, which helps establish her credibility as a writer.
To improve Erin’s nearly-perfect review, I’d encourage her to research one of her questions at the end of her review about how this method of creating biofuels was cheaper. She asked “was this a completely new method?”. This question wasn’t answered in the main article, but looking into this would help provide clarity for her audience. I’d also encourage Erin to provide a few examples of how “the process of converting sugar to fuel is well-known and well-used” so the reader can understand what biofuels are currently used for and what they could be.
I chose to comment on Erin’s review because I’m concerned about how we can protect the planet and prevent the global warming we’ve created. I enjoyed learning about this discovery of a cheaper method to produce biofuels, as well as the implications of this. Going forward, I now understand why we don’t have an abundant usage of biofuels at the moment and how we can transition to this cheaper method and replace fossil fuels.
Julia Reich
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AP Biology C Even
1/15/20
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Ohio State University. "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
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Erin’s review of the article, “Scientists develop a cheaper method that might create fuels from plants,” is a very well written piece and is easy to understand. One aspect she did well was explain complicated topics well. For example, she writes about “the process of converting sugar to butanol/ethanol” and does a nice job using easier to understand language. A second aspect done well is explaining how/why trying to find efficient ways to produce biofuels was a struggle in the past. She writes, “it is usually extremely expensive to produce high levels of those ‘helper molecules,’ or cofactors.” Erin clarifies to her reader that her article has significance in today’s world. A third aspect she did well was adding data into her review. For example, she writes, “in 2020, we reached average global temperatures that were 2.25 degrees Fahrenheit above pre-industrial averages.” Numbers are an easy way for a common reader to visualize her complex topic, and Erin is able to weave the data in nicely. Overall, her review made for a great read as it was well thought out and interesting.
Though Erin’s review was nearly perfect, one aspect she could easily fix is defining complex scientific terms, such as biofuels, NADH, and electrodes. The common reader may not know what these terms mean, and would need clarification in parentheses. By adding a brief definition in her review, Erin would completely eliminate confusion for her reader. A second aspect Erin could fix is adding her author’s perspective on the topic. Erin does add her own thoughts which adds complexity and sophistication to her review, but it would be more interesting to understand what her author and other scientists think as well. She could easily fix this by learning more about her author and his/her beliefs. In the end, Erin’s article came together nicely and she showed great strengths and few weaknesses.
I chose to read Erin’s review because her topic is very modern and will affect my future. Carbon dioxide emissions and fossil fuels have long been a topic of discussion as our planet is going to waste. Scientists need to develop new biofuels that are efficient to create so that we can save our planet. After reading Erin’s review, I was reminded that we as a society need to use less plastic and pollute less in order to save our home.
Holden D’Avico
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AP Bio
1/15/21
Foley, Erin. Scientists Develop a Cheaper Method That Might Help Create Fuels from Plants, Bronxville AP Biology, 12 Jan. 2021, bronxvilleapbiology.blogspot.com/2021/01/scientists-develop-cheaper-method-that.html.
Ohio State University. "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
Erin’s review of "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from plants,” is very informative and professional. The first aspect that is well presented happens in the first paragraph where Erin summarizes the topic. Erin begins by explaining why biofuels are expensive; she explains that it is expensive to produce NADH and NADPH which act as cofactors in producing energy. Erin goes on to explain that researchers at Ohio State University have discovered that electrodes can be used to oxidize NADH, resulting in a much more cost-friendly alternative to simply producing the cofactors. The article is summarized well and includes brief scientific background information that adds to the review and isn’t confusing. The second aspect that is well presented is in the second paragraph where Erin reveals why this discovery is so significant. She explains that if biofuels can be produced inexpensively, we could reduce carbon emissions by using less fossil fuels and also start to produce synthetic plants that artificially photosynthesize. Also, more access to NADH would allow for a new cancer treatment that works by restricting the flow of electrons within cancer cells. The final aspect that was well presented is in the third paragraph where Erin suggests that the author of the original article should’ve included more background information on biofuels and why they are so inexpensive. When I read the article I had not thought of this possible improvement, however, I now realize and agree with Erin that more information about biofuels would improve the article.
The first suggestion I have is to compare the proposed cancer treatment using NADH molecules to the current forms of cancer treatment such as Chemotherapy. Erin mentioned how a new form of cancer treatment could be developed if there was more access to NADH molecules. I would like to know how the current forms of treatment compare to the proposed form of treatment. My second suggestion is to elaborate on synthetic plants. I understand that synthetic plants are not the main focus of the article and are just one example of the benefits of biofuels, however, I would like to know more about these plants because I have never heard of them before.
One fact I was surprised by is that “in 2020, we reached average global temperatures that were 2.25 degrees Fahrenheit above pre-industrial averages. This margin of change is equivalent to that of 2016, which is alarming considering 2016 experienced a natural heating cycle - whereas 2020 experienced a natural cooling cycle.” I was shocked to learn that the earth is currently so warm. The current state of the earth, how we are treating the earth, and the temperature trend upwards made me realize the significance of biofuels. I appreciate biofuels more now because if they can be produced inexpensively, we could reduce carbon emissions and hopefully save the earth.
Kelly Baclija
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AP Bio
January 13, 2020
Foley, Erin. Scientists Develop a Cheaper Method That Might Help Create Fuels from Plants, 1 Jan. 1970, bronxvilleapbiology.blogspot.com/2021/01/scientists-develop-cheaper-method-that.html#comment-form.
Ohio State University. "Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
.
Erin’s review of “Scientists Develop a Cheaper Method That Might Help Create Fuels from Plants” is very well written and enjoyable to read. She begins by giving plenty of background information on the topic that makes it easier for the audience to understand, stating that “for years, scientists have been trying to find more efficient ways to produce biofuels, so that they could one day truly compete with fossil fuels”. She goes on to explain the scientific process of how cofactors are produced with the new cheaper alternative; “researchers used an electrode - a conductor of energy that can oxidize NADH - made out of nickel and copper to recreate NADH and NADPH in their reduced forms”. This, instead of simply putting that there is a cheaper alternative, allows the reader to gain a full understanding of the topic. Finally, Erin shifts to the discussion of climate change later in her article. She connects the previous idea of biofuels to the reasoning as to why they are important and it is enriches the writing greatly-- “for years, global corporations and governments have hesitated to reduce fossil fuel usage/increase reliance on biofuels due to their high production cost”. This answers any questions the reader may have as to why biofuels are so important in today’s climate conditions.
Although Erin’s review is very well written, there are a few areas of improvement. For example, although she includes a few quotes from senior author of the paper, Vish Subramaniam, it perhaps would have been insightful to include what other experts in the field would have to say about this discovery, or even if there are any possible negatives of this new alternative because the audience’s perspective of the topic may be more well rounded. Furthermore, I believe that her article would have benefited from providing explanations as to what NADH and NADPH is in order for the reader to understand how they relate to the entire process of these biofuels.
I chose this article because I was curious as to what a cheaper method of an alternative to fossil fuels would mean for our society. I ultimately learned that it could prove to beneficial for not only climate change, but advancements in oncology as well as developing synthetic plants. This will change my perception on how difficult it is to develop a clean, cheap alternative to energy use in our world today.
Foley, Erin. Scientists Develop a Cheaper Method That Might Help Create Fuels from Plants, Bronxville AP Biology, 12 Jan. 2021, bronxvilleapbiology.blogspot.com/2021/01/scientists-develop-cheaper-method-that.html.
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plants." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 8 January 2021.
For my current event, I read a review by Erin on an article originally published in Science News, titled “Scientists develop a cheaper method that might help create fuels from
plants.” First, Erin did an excellent job when writing her introduction because it immediately grabs the reader's attention by discussing how scientists have been trying to find more efficient ways to produce biofuels. “The process of converting sugar to fuel is well-known and well-used, but it is extremely difficult to do on a mass-scale, even with government-subsidized biofuel initiatives. This process of converting sugar to butanol/ethanol requires a lot of NADH and its derivative, NADPH, both of which allow carbon in cells to be transformed into energy.” This caught my attention and made me want to continue reading. Erin also did a good job explaining the importance of this study. For example, “Biofuels, on the other hand, are considered renewable energy sources, emit fewer greenhouse gases, are biodegradable, and are much safer to find on earth than fossil fuels (no drilling or mining necessary). Moreover, the discoveries made by Kadowaki and Jones have implications for oncology. Subramaniam’s previous work shows that controlling the flow of electrons within cancer cells - which they could do more easily with access to NADH - could slow their growth and ability to metastasize. ” This quote is a key point in the article. Lastly, I appreciate how Erin was able to make a connection between the topic and the reader by clearly explaining how this discovery is important to us because of its potential to reduce high levels of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
Although her review was very well written, there are certain areas in which she could have improved. For example, she should have included more statistics on the research because this would allow for the reader to understand the topic in greater depth. Secondly, Erin could have included more quotes from the scientists.
Erin’s current event was very interesting to read and informative. Her current event has made me want to learn more about more efficient solutions to climate change.