Ellie Briskin AP Bio C Even
October 30, 2015 Current Event 6
Grady, Denise. "Penis Transplants Being Planned to Help Wounded Troops." The New York Times. The New York Times, 06 Dec. 2015. Web. 07 Dec. 2015. <http://www.nytimes.com/2015/12/07/health/penis-transplants-being-planned-to-heal-troops-hidden-wounds.html?&moduleDetail=section-news-3&action=click&contentCollection=Science®ion=Footer&module=MoreInSection&version=WhatsNext&contentID=WhatsNext&pgtype=article>.
This article tells of one of the most breakthrough medical techniques; the penis transplant. Although this procedure has never been done in the United States, within just a few months we may have the technology for a young soldier with a horrific injury to have this operation. The organ will come from a deceased donor, and the surgeons, for Johns Hopkins University of Medicine, say it will start working in a matter of months after the operation, developing urinary function, sensation and, eventually, the ability to have sex. This is a huge accomplishment, for in 2001 to 3013, 1,367 deployed military service men suffered genital wounds. These injuries, however devastating, are unfortunately cloaked in shame, stigma and embarrassment, and not something many people hear about. Only two transplants have ever taken place: a failed one in China in 2006 and a successful one in South Africa last year. The Johns Hopkins doctors plan to do 60 transplants, monitor the results, and decide whether or not to make the operation a standard treatment. If successful, it may allow these men to father children, and since the testes (where sperm are produced) are not being replaced, the child will genetically belong to the father, not the donor. The article continues to cite multiple specialists and patients argueing the seriousness of genetalian injuries, saying it’s so much more than a physical injury, and many men feel it is the worst injury to go through. Also, if the transplant fails, it will be removed, leaving the recipient no worse off than before the surgery. The article also raises the question of whether or not these men and their partners will be able to deal with the fact that the penises are not the men’s own. A leading doctor, Dr. Brandacher, says that he thinks it will be like hand surgeries, saying that “I can tell you from all the patients — and I’ve been involved since 1998 — every single one, after surgery, look at the graft, try to move it and they immediately call it ‘my hand’... They immediately incorporate it as part of their body. I would assume, extrapolating, that this is going to be the same for this kind of transplant.” For now, the operation is only being offered to men injured in combat.
I was initially drawn in with this article because I find the topic of genital transplants extremely intriguing. I think it is beyond impressive that we are able to take one mans penis and attach it to another; and not just that, but actually have it functional. But more than that, this discovery is definitely still relevant to people today. For starters, the fact that we are just now discovering how to transplant these organs proves that no progress in any field is ever truly completed, and that development in all areas is always possible. It truly does open the doors of possibilities in the transplant world! One doesn’t think about how lucky he is to have an intact pelvic area until it is gone; think about it, losing this organ would interfere greatly with life. Being able to have a penis again would have a colossal effect on these patients.
Overall, I was impressed by the presentation of this article. Its paragraphs flowed and were ordered in a way that made sense, making it extremely easy for me to follow along. I also felt that it was strengthened by the substantial number of expert quotes, which legitimized the arguments. I also enjoyed the fun, conversational tone that the author used; this was not only easy to understand but also kept me, the reader, captive. However, the one criticism I have of the article is that it gave an extremely large amount of information, to a point of being extraneous. The latter portion of the article gave extremely extensive details on the psychological affects of being penis-less; although this was pertinent to the article, it took up roughly a fourth of what should have been a much more medically based arguement. I would suggest that the author synthesises his information better, not just condensing what he has but really sifting through what is important and what is not, while still maintaining a logical flow. But overall, I thought this article was very well put together, and maintained my interest throughout.